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Đề bài: In many countries, schools have severe problems with students behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Brainstorming:

a. Body 1: Causes

- Parents don't have the time: hectic lifestyle with work + deadlines + social relationship 

-> render many parents unable to care for their children

-> kids: find pleasure from Internet + TV -> imitate and be instilled bad behavior 

- Parents spoil the children: 

   + Accommodate children's every demand

   + Entitle children to excessive personal freedom

=> become self-absorbed and sometimes vulnerable to negative influences -> indifferent to others + adopt harmful habits

b. Body 2: Solutions

- Parents: spend more time with their children

   + Teach: etiquette + good behavior 

   + Supervise closely -> prevent kids from associating with ill-mannered peers and unpleasant websites

- Parents: not over-indulge children -> instead: impose discipline on family -> praise + punish justifiably -> kids: straightforward and responsible

=> Students: better behavior towards schools, teachers and friends

My essay:

It is true that the wrong behavior and attitudes which students are adopting nowadays has become a common problem in school. This issue can be attributed to a variety of reasons and tackled by changing how parents spend time and teach their children at home.

It is perfectly obvious that parents' actions are the key rationale behind children's behavioral problem. Today, the hectic lifestyle with work, deadlines and social relationships has rendered a large number of couples unable to care enough for their kids. Therefore, the children tend to spend time on TV, Internet and technological devices rather than family activities, which can encourage them to imitate and be instilled bad behavior from films and Internet. Besides, other adults have a tendency of indulging their daughters and sons. They accommodate children's every demand and entitle them to excessive personal freedom, which can result in their self-absorption and vulnerability to negative influences. As a result, those children can become indifferent to other people and adopt harmful habits, contributing their wrong behavior in school. 

In order to address the aforementioned problem, parents should perform prompt actions. They ought to spend more time for their children regardless of their work schedule and social circle. Kids should be taught etiquette and good behavior at home as well as closely supervised by family members when making friends and hanging out. This would prevent kids from associating with ill-mannered peers and unpleasant websites. Another method that parents should follow is to avoid overindulging the children. Loving kids by imposing discipline on family and launching them on the right path is absolutely better than being a permissive parents. To this end, children should be praised and punished justifiably according to their behavior towards others. This would make them become straightforward and responsible people, which can effectively curb students' behavioral problem in school.

In conclusion, parental actions is the main contributor to the wrong behavior of students when studying at school, and the proposed solution must be taken to combat the impacts of this phenomenon.

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